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The table >> 본문과는 다르게 chart라고 해주세요 below indicates change in types of travel. The information is shown for average distance in miles travelled per person per year by walking, bicycle,car, local bus, long distance bus, train, cab and the other thing in the United Kingdom between 1985 and 2000.
As shown on the table, by car, long distance bus, train, taxi and the other of travelling increase rapidly over a period of the research. In particular, by long distance bus and taxi of travel jumped over twice and triple respectively. On the other hands, by walking and bicycle of travel declined slightly during the same period. As well by local bus of travel>> travelling by local bus decreased significantly, on the contrary by comparing to long distance of travel.
According to the table, the relatively short distance .travels, which is about by walking, bicycle, local bus of travel, are decreased between 1985 and 2000>> 콤마 빼셔도 됩니다 and the long distance travels are increased over the same period. Finally, the average travel distance is generally increased about 30 percent. (160자)
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