▶ Your Answer : The chart compares how average house prices had changed in the capital city >> 다섯개의 주요 도시라고 하는게 맞겠네요 New York과 Frankfurt는 수도가 아니죠 from five different countries, compared with that of >> ?? that of 를 받을게 없네요 the cost of the year 1989 in the period and between 1990 and 2002.
In the first period(1990 to 1995), there was a little increase of the price in Madrid and Frankfurt, which is are about 1.5% and 2% respectively. Others had larger decreases in amoun ; with the amount of -5% for New York, -7.5% for both London and Tokyo.
In the following period >> 몇년인지 말해주세요, the trend varied differently in each country. New York had a 10% increase, compared to the first period, which resulted in a 5% increase in total. Madrid maintained its increase upward trend >> 뒤에 콤마 빼주세요, with a smaller change of 2.5%. Tokyo also had a change from -7.5% to -5%, but it still remained lower price than 1989's price. Only Frankfurt had a decrease with about 0.5%, which is the smallest change among all cities. In contrast, London showed the highest rate of increase,>> 콤마 빼주세요 from -7.5% to 12%.
In summary, average house prices generally increased except Frankfurt, but rates were different for each city.>>??
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