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Dear Sir or Madam,
I usually eat breakfast and lunch at the college cafeteria because it is very affordable, convenient and fast service, and specially the staffs are so friendly and welcoming.
There are, however, something to complain. I am a student in this college and I always have lunch in your cafeteria. However, I am writing to ask you to improve the environment of your place. Firstly, the tables are not clean enough, specailly at lunch lunch time, which is a little bit annoying and disgusting.
The canteen is so convenient and gives fast service, which makes me feel thankful. However, for my mind, the tables are dirty, so I cannot enjoy fully the meal time. Second, it is very hard to stay and eat in this summer season, >> 마침표 찍어주시구요( 접속사가 없어서 ) In my opinion, the air-conditioner>> 대쉬 빼주세요 is not working properly and moreoever kitchenwares such as ovens and grills are bringing up the indoor temperature as well kitchenwares are of helps to increase the indoor temperature as well.
I think these problems I mentioned above can be solved very easily. The first problem can be fixed by hiring one more part-time staffs to clean the tables and providing the trolleys shelves where people can throuw dump the leftover and leave their plates and cutlery. Second the other solution for the indoor temperature is that hire a repairer to fix the air-conditioning system and also install ventilation system to flow the hot air out if some budgets could be allocated are affordable.
Your Faithfully,
Bumjun Kim
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