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The bar chart shows that the UK and international students gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK university in 2009.>> 문제와 너무 비슷하네요 어휘력 문장 구성력 모두 감점이 됩니다 대학 가셔서 어떤 주제에 대해 3개 이상 단어가 겹치면 plagiarism 에 걸립니다 The vertical axis is percentage of students gaining second class degrees. and the horizontal axis is list of subjects.
Based on the chart, in half of subjects, more UK students than international students achieved gaining second class degrees in english literature, art history, international law, >> 세개 이상 나열 중 마지막 and/or 앞엔 콤마가 나옵니다 and sociology than international students. and >> 문두에 and 가 나오지 않습니다 the same percentage of UK students and international students remarked showed a remarkable outcomes on a gaining degrees in nursing and accountancy subject. According to the graph, fewer percentage of UK students than international students gained degrees in electrical engineering and information technology than international students. >> 과목 다 소문자로 써주세요 위엔 문제라 각각 단어를 나열한거라 그 단어들이 처음을 구성하는거라 처음에 대문자가 붙은 것입니다
Overall, the chart illustrated comparing data about the percentage of international and percentage of UK students gaining second class degrees. In four of the eight subjects, more percentage of UK students than international students gained degree in language-related subject than international students. In contrast, more percentage of international students than UK students was accounted for in technology subject, Electrical and Information technology than UK students .
과목은 전부 소문자로 작성해주시구요 than 은 문장 뒤에 위치시켜 주시구요
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단어도 문장 구조도 너무 제한적이네요 2009년 표이니 서론 제외한 나머지 모두 과거 동사로 작성하셔야 하구요
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Lexical Resource - 5
Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 4
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