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Dear Mr. Toshback,
How are you today? My name is I am Eric Lee, a book-keeper in the finance team, and am writing this letter to reqquest a week-off one-week vacation from work.
Unfortunately, there is a conference in Korea that I recently received invitation was invited. The conference meeting will be held for five days from the 17th till the 21st of June, which is in a couple of >> a couple of 는 구어체입니다 아카데믹에선 쓰지 말아주세요 few weeks. Of late sometime ago, I have talked asked to my colleague, Mr. Hennings, He is more than happy to support me by taking over my shift work. He told me he is currently away enjoying his annual holiday, however, he will return a week early for me from his annual holiday. willing to do that after returning earlier from his annual holiday.
I am sorry for any inconvenience caused by the short notice the absence. Thanks you for your attention to this matter, I am looking forward to receiving your prompt response. >> prompt 는 자칫 무례할 수 있습니다 신속한 답변 바란다고 하고 약간 명령적인 어조로 자주 쓰이기도 하는 말입니다
Yours sincerely, Eric.
Yours sincerely
Eric
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