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The line graph illustrates the food consuming patterns in the UK between 1970 and 1990 with three different categories - hamburger, fish & and (문제에서 &이라고 제시되어있더라도 글을 쓸 땐 다 풀어서 씁니다) chips and pizza.
The most noticeable feature is that the largest amount was shown in fish and chips in 1990 whereas the least amount was taken by pizza at the some period, and each value was 500 and about 210 respectively.
When it comes to fish and chips, it had started at around 90 in 1970 and shown a gradual increase until 1980. After 1980, a substantial number of Fish and Chips fish and chips (대문자로 갑자기 사용 x) were sold, presenting a steep rise with 300 in 1985 and finally 500 in 1990. Similarly, the amount of hamburgers consumed? 어떤 햄버거인지 명시를 계속 해주는 것이 좋습니다 had shown a subtle upward tend.
On the other hand, as for the pizza sales, over the 300 pizzas which had been a market leader were sold in 1990. Not long ago, the sale of pizza seemed to be declined until 1985 and minimally raised rose (raise/rise 구분 해주세요) in 1990 accounting for at around over 200.
By analyzing the data, the top food being sold by the British at a food market evidently changed between over 20 years, pizza to fish and chips.
SCORE: 5.5
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