▶ Your Answer :
The bar graph depicts the number of
students studying part time or full time for further
education depends depending on gender for
further education in the UK United Kingdom from 1970 to 1991. The numbers are
measured in thousands.
It is interesting to note that, the number of part time women has gradually
increased while the part time male students showed some periodic fluctuations. For The number of full time students are
considerably have small in number in
overall, and the number of students for both
genders increased for the given periods.
In 1970/71 about 780,000 females have
attended as a part time education while
the number of men was 1,000,000. This number gradually increased for females to
reach at its highest point of about 1,100,000 females in 1991. Meanwhile, the male students
decreased to 850,000 in 1980/81 and then
finished at 900,000 students in 1990/91.
There was a
considerably large number of male (of
about 150,000) students at UK education system
compared to 100,000 females in 1970/71. However,
this the number
increased rapidly for women to reach at 200,000
in 1980/81 and 210,000 in 1990/91, whereas the
number of men male
(형용사가 필요한 자리죠.) students rose steadily to end at
the same number of students as those for women, 210,000.
(210).
Score: 6
Comment: 도표의 내용을
잘 정리하셨습니다. 다만, 단위 (thousands)를 신경 써주세요. 일부 어색한 문법과 표현을 본문에 고쳐두었으니 참고하세요.
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