Many people assert that History is a subject among the most important subjects in school. However, there are other people who think that some subjects like Science and Technology are more important compared to History on these days.
On the one hand, lots of scientific skills have been developed in the 21st century. Also, it can make people feel more comfortable when they are working and it is quite useful a quite usefulness in living a life. In fact, some tasks that humans cannot handle easily are well conducted by robots some tasks such as a human can not work easily well are able to allowed to the robots. They can be more safe by using robots or various techniques. (여기서 그러한 기술의 사례로 어떤 게 있는지 짧게 적어주시는 게 좋습니다. 이 바로 뒷 문장은 사실 큰 의미가 없고요.) Therefore, if students should be study Science and Technology subjects more than History in school, it can be helped them when they survive the tough society.
Nevertheless, History is considered as the most important school subject by some people. This is because History lets people recognize a plan to achieve their goals. For example, even if students study any subject which is considered important is called an important thing like Technology without History, they would ruin their goals since they could make a mistake. It means that the mistake which was made in last time or long ago in the past. (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요!) This subject can help us do to not bring a mistake which their (us 랑 their 는 호응이 안 됩니다. 이러한 사항이 CC에 영항을 주므로 주의해주세요~) ancestors already made did before.
In conclusion, some subjects like Science and technology can be noted to students because they can learn many useful supports in the future but it is undeniable that History is very serious studying in school. (실전에서 시간이 부족하셨다면, 이 문장, 그리고 본론 첫 번째 문단의 마지막 문장 등을 지워주시면 됩니다.) In my opinion, I believe that History is one of the most important subjects studying in school since it can make people have more perfect plan compared to in the past and finally they can go upstairs to their achievements without mistakes.