▶ Your Answer : The chart gives information on each person spending chickens , beef, lamb and fish the spending on chickens, beef, lamb and fish by each person every week from 1979 to 2004.
The most interesting thing is only chickens were increased, while the rest of the items were decreassed from 1979 to 2004. Chickens started the figure, at about 140 grams in 1979, and they were steadily increased to around 250 grams. In the case of beef, its expenditure was approximately 240 grams in 1979, but there were some fluctuateions between 1979 and 1984. After that, it almost went down to about 110 grams in 2004. Lamb was the second largest consumption in 1979, aat 150 grams, but the graph was descended to around 70 grams in 2004. Although fish was declined as well from 1979 to 2004, there was no striking variation, approximately 65 grams in 1979 to 40 grams in 2004.
People ate more chickens in 2004 than those in 1979, but the rest of the ingredients, meat, beef and lamb, were highly diminished. However, fish were steadily consumed by steady ratio anytime over the period.
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