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There are some people who think that concentrating on only one skill is a better choice for a satisfactory life. However, in my opinion, obtaining of many other skills is wise rather than only being stick with to one thing. This is because, learning plenty of skills means that achieving more opportunities to direct someone’s>> 그냥 one보단 someone somebody 등으로 써주세요 life, recognizing which job is more suitable to my personal things. Indeed, with the flow of society, it is required to acquire a second ability in order to easily make out own job easy.
To begin with, studying many skills produces ample chances to get acquire a proper job as knowing whether this major is proper to oneself or not. This is true that it is too risky to get a job by one time without knowing what they are good at or what is other choices. According to a research by CNN, most of people responded, who gained jobs which is in the same field to their university’s majors, and said that they were not satisfied with jobs which they are working for and if there were more choices to know other opportunities to fit on them. They would like to learn other skills as well in order to acquire the best job in their lives. That is to say that it is hard to change a job, since they have been employed, even though people are not gratified as far as people have only one skill. Thus, it is a safe and sensible decision to learn many skills in order not to take a considerable mistake.
On top of that, with the movement of a fast-paced society, employers prefer to hire people who not only obtain main ability but also handle second ability which is able to assistant to work well done. This is because, nowadays, so every single work is connected with other works that it is difficult to succeed one’s business, even if they are perfect on their own field. From my personal experience, when I was looking for a job and my friend as well for a designer position, I could gain a well-known company by one shot because the company asked candidates to have English ability. Fortunately, I had enough English scores to be granted. On the other hand, my friend was failed. The reason why is that even though she was the top on her majors, she did not have any second languages which the company required. This is true that people no longer be able to stand on only one skill to achieve a better job and, furthermore, one’s life.
To sum up, this is not negotiable to learn many skills in this contemporary society in order to guarantee satisfaction from someone’s job, and furthermore, one’s life. In this regard, I do believe that people should acquire many abilities as much as people can to be a successful life.
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