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The advent of new technology on food materials offers sufficient foods to people. A rapid progress in transportation also allows us to move more comfortable, providing some private vehicles. As people's lives changed by environments, they has become uncontrollable about on their weight and, finally, lots of people are suffered from obesity. I think the obesity disease >> 영어는 반복을 싫어해서 바꿔드렸습니다 must be dealt with as a problem at the government level, because it brings about many kinds of health illness.
The agriculture, livestock and fishery industry were developed enough to supply people's appetite in countries. The vitalization on economy is also helpful that people could earn money to afford their purchase whay they want material wants. Besides, the appearance of private and public transportation stimulates people's laziness>> 사람들의 게으름에 대해 어떻게 어떤 자극을 줬나요? 근거가 부족합니다. As the combination of above reasons, more and more people are increasingly > more and more이 왔다면 이 자리에 와야하며 more and more보다 좋은 표현이 increasingly 입니다 becoming fat. The harmfulness of obesity was discovered through a number of medical researches. It causes some other fatal diseases which have serious impacts on health such as high blood >> 가운데 - 빼주세요 pressure or diabetes.
To prevent the side effects of obesity, the solution should be suggested. Firstly, people tend to have no caution about how dangerous the obesity is. They are bent on enjoying satisfaction in terms of wealth and safety. For an improvement of consciousness, it is one of the good measures that the government manufactures a public benefit advertisement and encourages people to notice the danger of obesity. The government also could project the clinics to prevent obesity and offers it to their national members.
To sum up, in my view, the growth of many different fields in society provides us some advantages, but, sometimes, it is such as two sides of a coin. It drags people to a problem which has effects on health directly. The solutions ought to be treated by the government to undeceive people's ignorance on obesity.
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