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The line graphs shows the changes of rates in satisfaction of the staffs of four colleges from 1991 to 2002.
As it can be seen, the college A experienced an upward trend, whereas college B showed a slight fluctuation from 1991 to 1995. After that, the satisfaction rating in college A >> the former 도 좋겠네요 declined sharply until the year 1997 from 80 to 55 and then it leveled off for 3 years. but 문장이 너무 길어서 잘라드렸습니다 However, it presented a decrease again to 40 until 2002. However>> 앞과 중복이므로 On the other hand, there was a steady increase in the college>> the latter 도 되겠네요 B from 50 to 70 after the year 1995.
Rates in satisfaction of the staffs in college C has not many no almost changes from 1991 to 1995 but, after that, it experienced a downward trend for three years. From 1998 to 1999, there was a dramatic increase from about 10 to 70 and it began to rise higher until 2002. In college D. Moreover, the rates leveled off at 40 until 2000 and it, then, decreased slightly for two years.
In conclusion, the most significant changes occurred in college C, whereas there are almost no movements in college D.
우선 college 들 앞에 the를 써주시고 계속 college A B C D를 나열할 것이 아니라 위처럼 the latter the former 등 다양하게 써주시길 바랍니다 또한 대문자는 문제에서 맨 앞 글자에 대문자를 붙인 것들이므로 College 가 아닌 college 라고 해주세요
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