■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s | |
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▶ Your Answer :
The pie chart below provides information on the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. There are four type of worldwide land degradation given.
First of all, according to the pie, 35% of over-grazing degrades compared to others. However, over-cultivation is significantly less at 28% and the least other is minimal 7%
In addition. the table illustrates three different types of the world for 1990. There is most noticeable that 23% of total land in Europe was used for 9.2% of deforestation, 7.7% of over-cultivation and 5.5% of over-grazing. Oceania comes in second. 13% of total land was harnessed for 1.7% of deforestation, 11% of over-grazing and over-cultivation was zero, while 5% of land degraded by North America at least
In conclusion, the region of Europe generates problem about agricultural land to be less productive, whereas North America scarcely has impact on agricultural land
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