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The cartograph below provides information on the town of Garlsdon. There are two supermarket (s) plannings to build for in the town.
First of all, there is an outstanding feature of the map is that the S2 is intended to place the centre of the town which is surrounded by housing and industry. S2 seems to be a good choice to be located in the town centre because a number of housing and industry bring about a good outcome, >> and는 콤마를 필요로하지 않습니다 and there are railway and main roads that scores of people are readily able to travel readily to purchase some grocery >> 불가산명사로 항상 단수취급 해주세요.
Moreover, there are two cities such as Cransdon and Brandon, which are located nearby the town centre approximately between approximately 16km and 25km
In addition, the S1 is going to be placed in countryside and >>새로운 문장을 콤마로 이을 순 없습니다 this is near Hindon city about 3km by the main road and the railway. Those people are capable of visiting S1 to buy some foods, and also the number of housings is located >>exist 너무 같은 동사가 나와서 바꿨습니다 as well
In conclusion, planning for town to build two supermarkets may result in a great income and surplus. This projection seems to be effective to improve a better environment for people.
문법적인 실수가 몇몇 보였습니다 짧은 글일수록 문법의 실수가 더 큰 비중을 차지하고 더 큰 오류를 만들게 됩니다 주의해주세요
Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 5 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5
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