The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
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The two diagrams demonstrate the birth procedure of the moth from birth to death of the silkworm and the process of producing fabric, silk cloth.
To begin with, a mature moth spawns its eggs on mulberry leaf and the silkworm larvae emerge from the eggs after 10 days from its spawn. Each of larvae grows with feeding on the mulberry leaves for 4 to 6 weeks. Then, the grown larvae transfer surround itself with silk thread its shape into silk thread and they stay for 3 to 8 days inside the thread. After this period, the thread becomes a cocoon and go through the metamorphosis. After 16 days, the moth wakes up eventually and comes out of the cocoon after 16 days. The whole time to be a moth is taken around two >> 10 이하의 숫자는 영어로 적는게 좋습니다 months starting from spawning eggs to culminating undergo the metamorphic process.
Meanwhile, to produce silk cloth, a cocoon is utilized as a raw material of the cloth. This cocoon is placed into boiling water in the pot and the thread from the boiled cocoon is unwound, ranging the length of the thread from 300m to the maximum of 900m for each cocoon. At the final stage, all the threads is dyed after the fabric materials are twisted and wove with each of them.
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