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There is no question about it that fresh water for drinking fresh water is essential in order to live. Nevertheless, It has been fell short as time went by in the overall countries. I suggest argue their>>?? causes and solutions should be clarified to prevent from shortening of fresh water and should guarantee stable provision of fresh water. I will discuss about these below.
To begin with, there are several reasons why fresh water is decreasing recently. Firstly, many countries, especially in developing countries, are exploiting their territories carelessly and there are few little fresh water because much fresh water is polluted. In China, For example, The China has been taken so much senseless development that underground water is contaminated last some decades. Many people in China are not drinking underground water directly and bottled water is generalized. Secondly, many people do not be aware of meagerness and value of fresh water. Some people have taken fresh water for granted misunderstood that drinkable water was is a endless resource and still cheap to purchase it. At the present rate of progress As this reducing trend is kept going, the drinking water will be exhausted. For instance, in 2008, many Spainish people have gone through shortage of drinking water. I think that they do not realize precious of fresh water.>> 단순 추측성 글인가요?
For these reasons, we should aware their severe seriousness of situation and suggest how to deal with their problem. ,firstly, I firmly assert that many developing countries must realize sustainable development. If they are not concern about the environment, they will bring about severe water pollution. Furthermore, many developed countries pay attention to global campaign to prevent from polluting of underground water. Secondly, people who belong to any society should accept the importance of fresh water and should at least practice minimum things such as fastening of water tap and throw no littering away to the river.
To sum up, fresh water is diminished and contaminated because many countries and people do not be aware of the serious of conditions. If many nations will consider sustainable development and people take the right action to block of water contamination, this problem is getting will be better in the future.
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