▶ Your Answer : Some people believe that disapearing of several languages does not really matter because this will make humans' life easier. However, I totally disagree with this opinion so that I am going to explain why the more existence of many languages is good for the world, the better.
Firstly, we can express elaboratively ourselves the most elaboratively only when we use our own developed language. This is because languages have been developed, with involving absorbing our way of thinking. This fact can be detected when we look closely at closely the usage of any language. For example, Korean language never uses the expression such as 'to protect us and our rights' but only use 'to protect our rights'.>> 끊어주세요 길어집니다 and This represents Korean people's way of thinking which is not divide concepts from their objects clearly>>??. If Korean people try to use another language to express themselves, it will >> if 절 주절 동사 조동사 시제 일치시킵니다 be not easy for them to express correctly.
Secondly, we can enjoy discovering a lot of new things that has been created in different languages. Take K-pop for example >> 구어가 아닙니다 완전한 문장들로 구성해주세요 For example, K-pop is a Korean pop songs that has produced in Korean in Korea. Even though K-pop, which means Korean pop song, is sung in Korean, many other foreign people from different language spoken countries in Asia or even Europe are enjoying K-pop. I believe that people enjoy K-pop because in part of Korean language>>?? 문법도 틀렸고 뜻도 모르겠습니다. >> because는 문두에 오지 않고 It is가 붙습니다 becasue they find the sound of language and the different, new, interesting way of thinking new and interesting. If there are only for example English language songs, which has the same sounds and the way of thinking, there will be no new discovery for listeners>> 갑자기 웬 발견인가요. I believe the same goes to literature or any other art forms.>>??
In conclusion, from what I have discussed, we could say that the death of a language means the death of a culture. I believe we can express effectively ourselves most effectively when we use our own language and we can enjoy discovering new creative things in different languages when languages are diverse.
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