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The graph shows the changes in the demand for hamburgers, fish& chips, >> 나열 마지막에 콤마라고 말씀드렸습니다 and pizza from 1970 to 1990.
In 1970, it is immediately apparent that in 1970 the most popular food was pizza. However, the demand for pizza started from 300 grams followed by a spectacular fell to just over 200 grams in 1985.
The striking feature of the graph is the demand for fish & chips. In 1970, fish & chips were the second favourite food among people,>> 콤마 빼주세요 and from 1980 on the total demand surged to a high of 500 grams in 1980 from 99 grams in 1970.
Furthermore, hamburgers were the least popular food in 1970 with the total demand of 15 grams >> 15그램이 어디서 나온건가요?, which increased gradually till 1985. The total demand for hamburgers skyrocketed to 299 grams in 1990.
In conclusion, there were substantial increases in the demand for hamburgers and sea food, whereas there was a significant fall in the popularity of pizza.
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