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For a long time,
history has existed since people human beings lived in the world. People recorded what they were
doing in various ways. That is why many people are fascinating this subject and
they insist the history is very important for our life. However, there are some
people argue that this is boring and useless for their life.
For ages,
Hhistory has been regarded as a crucial part of people`s life. There are several
reasons. First of all, Hhistory is an indicator of our life, helping us to move
further. It means, without it, we might have still lived in a primitive way.
For example, it took a month to make a pair of trousers two hundreds years ago,
while, nowadays, <-no comma we can make hundreds of pairs in a the same period of time. I believe that
the reason why we could moved forward is Hhistory. Secondly, Hhistoryy is one of the major
industries in many nations, especially in France. The representative example is
the Louvre museum. When most people visit France, their priority might be going to that
museum. This produces brings a lot of income from tourists. Besides, it helps people to
strengthen their identity. People of every single nation need to know where
they were from and how their ancestor lived.
Unfortunately, not
everyone agrees that history is still important in these days. Especially for
young people, they feel bored to history so easily. They regard think it is not
practical and not related in modern industry. This is a pity because, as I said
before, we might have not improved as much as current cutting-edge society
without history.
To conclude
this, I believe Hhistory is the most crucial part of our life than any other
area as everyone needs to learn ?이해가 잘 안되는 부분입니다. 모두가 배워야하기 때문에 다른 분야보다 중요하다...?. Even though some people might consider it is dull
and unrealistic to modern industry, but (even though 자체에 but의 의미를 포함하고 있기 때문에 두번 반복하지 않습니다) we cannot make progress without history.
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