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Nowadays, many people have concerned about the ways to improve people’s health. There are controversial issues whether increasing the number of sports facilities is the most suitable ways to enhance public health or other methods are needed. Personally, I think that government’s schemes through the advertisements or campaigns make people much more healthier.
First of all, a growing number of sports facilities are likely to give an influential effect to the public fitness. This is because investments on the various sports equipment and public sports centers provide adequate conditions to exercise regardless of a long distance or expensive cost of private sports centers. For example, if the government builds a badminton court in front of apartments more and more people will utilize it during their leisure time with family or friends since they can save a time to go farther and money for the use of facilities. Through this, naturally they could solve their own health problems, such as obesity. As a result, providing numerous sports facilities can induce people to exercise and finally be healthier.
On the other hand, increasing the amount number of sports facilities hardly analyze the data statistically and know how much the facilities improve the public healthy. Therefore, the more specific and viable measures are needed. For example, the government should introduce a physical examination system annually which allows people to check their health condition and encourage people to have an interest in health problem. In addition, they also have to implement compulsive compulsory physical exercise time, such as stretching time an hour a day in schools and work places. Hence, these methods can be more effective to enhance the overall health level.
In conclusion, increasing the number of sports facilities is positive for people’s health. However, I believe that the campaign or government’s schemes are more efficient measures to improve overall citizen’s health.
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