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The bar graph illustrates that how many people take took part in adult education classes categorized in four sections– drama, painting, sculpture, and language - in the evening with by each gender, and the pie chart presents the percentage of five ages groups with five groups; under 20, 20-29, 30-39, 40-49, and over 50 in 2009.
The most noticeable feature of the bar graph is that the largest number of women was taken took in language class while most males tended to attend painting class the most and each value was 40 and 25 respectively. However, the least amount of women’s participation was shown in sculpture lecture with 5 and similarly men accounted for the smallest amount in sculpture and drama which was doubled than women ?이해되지 않는 부분입니다.
As for the pie chart, the more aged people were, the more people participated in the classes: people between over 50 to 40 made up a percentage of 68 which was two thirds of the pie chart whereas from 39 to under 20 took up on third.
Overall, in every class except for sculpture, women were likely to attend to classes more than males and the largest proportion was taken by the old people.
SCORE: 5.5-6
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