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As technology has been developing, there are getting more and more people discussing about its effects on people’s relationships. Even though the comfort that updated technology provides to people is tremendous, the consequences from better (어색) technology, unfortunately, affect badly to humans’ interactions.
Firstly, better IT Information technology (IT) [처음엔 다 풀어서 사용하고 두번째 사용부터 약자로 사용합니다] makes friends get away from each other. For example, smart phones helps easier connection and faster contact. However, the problem is that it continues while people meet their friends. From my experience, I was disappointed to at my friends doing playing with their phone during our time. Smart phone users already start losing their ability to control the amount of time they spend on small screens. Though I suppose that application inventors make apps for comfortable convenient lives and easier access, smart phone users use this tool as a hammer ruining their sweet time.
Unfortunately, it is more tragedy on the internet between strangers. On web, there is one strength advantage for computer users: they do not have to show their name but their ID. Although this ID system meant better environment to enjoy internet, such as critical views and honest comments, it had let people lose themselves. They use that strength as their weapon, and they start commenting negatively and harmfully with no reason. The thing they enjoy hurting each other is called as cyber bullying. Even, (<-no comma) experts say that it is a kind of disease in case of people who do not realize that they are bullying somebody.
To sum up, hero’s efforts on making better world are distorted as black hands caused polluted online society.
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