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Nowadays, a majority of companies prefer adapt/use 등 (선호하다의 경우 기본적으로는 ~에 비해 선호한다 쪽에 가까워서, 현재 문맥에 그렇게 적절하다고 볼 수는 없습니다.) advertising to increase their sales. While some people advocate that this is an
effective way to publicize products, and (~하는 반면, 그리고~~로 되어있는데 이는 적절하지 않죠. CC에 영향을 주는 사항입니다.) others believe that keeping high product
quality will automatically advertise it. In my opinion, I agree that
advertisements through the Internet (인터넷은 고유명사이므로 대문자 시작입니다. 다른데에도 다 수정해주세요~) internet or media are effective ways to grow a
company’s sales profits.
To begin with, (동사가 하나 들어가야 합니다.) advertisements through
online is the most accessible and approachable way for the public. With the
advance of technology, anyone, including those who have a who has hectic schedule uses the internet, even buys
the advertised products in online malls anytime they want. A product which has
good to excellent reviews will be bought without any other thoughts if it is required
by the users. Moreover, they share their opinion and reviews about products on
the internet, as a result, this will help the company to boost their sales.
Correspondingly, using advertising has
both merits and drawbacks on the society. As for benefits, it plays an important
role to deliver information of their (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 쓰이지 않도록 주의해주세요~) products to the public. As well as this,
it is effective to promote new released items to people, which provide the
number of options to choose for consumers. Successful companies frequently
expose their advertisements, encourage people to buy and use their products
relatively higher than products not advertised. However, some advertisements may
have negative impacts on the public by false and exaggerated statements. Since those commercials it
tends to deliver only advantages, it can be misleading and make confusion about
their products.
In conclusion, advertisements through the
internet have gifted since consumers simply buy products online malls and they share
useful reviews about the products. This trend has positive impacts on the
public in terms of delivering information, at the same time, consumers can be
damaged by false and misleading advertising.
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