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The bar graph indicates that the percentage of total earned profits from seven popular movie genres in US theatres from 1995 to 2005.
Overall, it is clear that the proportion of Adventure, Comedy, Action and Drama genres always surpassed that of Thriller, Musicals and Animation regardless of any year. However, there was a decrease in the percentage of profits made on Action and Drama genres, while that of Comedy and Adventure considerably increased between 1995 and 2005, although Adventure' popularity went down in 2000.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that Drama was the highest percentage of earned profits, reaching a point at approximately 28%, whereas Animation hit a low at roughly 4% in 1995. After 5 years, the proportion of profits made from Comedy part dramatically rose 5% compared to 1995. Then, that of Action and Drama genres declined. In 2005, Thriller and Musical's earned profits proportion were lower then others, remaining at around 3-4%, whilst animation substantially grew by approximately 8%, but the gap between these and other 4 genres had widened over the 10 years. (181 words)
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