The graphs below show the ups and downs of total volume of export
earnings and the percentages changed changes between 2015 and 2016 in one country.
For ‘Textiles’ (따옴표, 괄호 등이 들어가면 글이 지저분해지기 시작해서, 그냥 따옴표 없이 소문자로 시작하고 이어가는 게 낫습니다.), which showed the biggest surge in its figure, the earnings was increased 15.24% from 25 billion US$ to above 30 billion US$. ‘Petroleum products’, which was the most well exported categories in the given category (category 가 연속해서 쓰이지 않도록 주의해주세요!) by 60 billion US$ of earnings also increased 3% to 62 billion US$ (여기의 경우도 다른데처럼 어림잡아 표현해주세요~). ‘Engineered goods’, which was the second largest category in earning volumes also increased 8.5% from 55 billion US$ to slightly above 60 billion US$ maintaining its status as the second largest after ‘petroleum and products’. Adding to that, ‘Agricultural products’ also in the growing tendency in the given period though the changed figure were merely 0.81%.
Among given five major export categories, four categories
experienced increases in their earnings as noted above. Meanwhile ‘Gems and
jewellery’ export earnings were decreased 5.18% from 42 billion US$ to 40
billion US us$ from 2015 to 2016.
총평: (6/6/7/7) 6.5
지금 영작 실력이 정말 좋으신 축에 속하기 때문에, 요령만 익혀주신다면 충분히 7/7.5도 가능할 겁니다.
task 1에서는 표를 포괄적으로 요약하는 overview 를 넣는 것이 핵심인데, 그게 없을 경우 아무리 세부적인 분석이 잘 되었다고 하더라도 TR에서 5점, 잘 쳐줘야 6점을 넘기기 어려우니까, 반드시 서론 다음에 overview 를 넣고 작성해주세요~수고하셨습니다 :)