The two pictures give the information about the differences of Grange Park a GRANGE PARK between 1920 and today. (여기서 엔터 한 번 더 쳐주셔야 합니다. 혹은 아예 엔터 없이 스페이스로 이어가셔도 되고요.)
Overall, it is clear that there have been some significant changes in the park. Although the two main entrances have not been changed, almost everything else has every other things have been replaced or removed and something new has have appeared.
First of all, the fountain that was located in the center of park is replaced with the rose garden which was South-West and North-East (얘네는 소문자 시작입니다. 동서남북 방향의 경우 그 자체로는 소문자 시작이고, South Korea 처럼 고유명사와 결합되는 경우에 한해서만 대문자로 시작해주시면 돼요.) of the park and is surrounded by four seats now.
Second, the amphitheatre for concerts is newly built at the West west side of the park instead of the stage for musicians. In addition, the place where rose garden and pond for water plants consisted in is filled with cafe and children’s play area. Not only the glass house was removed and a water feature is constructed at the east East side, but also the entrance into underground for car parking has been added is next to the water feature.
총평: (5/6/5/6) 5.5
시제의 경우 지금처럼 현재의 지도가 비교대상으로 주어져있을 시에는 현재완료를 쓴다고 보시면 됩니다. 또한 동서남북의 대소문자와 관련해서는 이번 글이 아니더라도 앞으로 계속 쓰일 사항이므로 이 역시 이번 기회를 통해 확실히 체크해주시는 게 좋고요.
수고하셨습니다 :)