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It is certain that there are many controversies
as regarding the acceptance of a bad situation. Humans have the has ability of controlling over
the problem. Therefore, some people think that it is better to accept a bad situation.
However, others argue that they should try to and improve a bad situation. (여기는 순서가 바뀌어야 하지 않나요? control 은 improve 쪽과 연결이 되지 않나 싶습니다.)
Some people believe that it is best to
accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job. This is because it is
too complicated and difficult to change or improver the unpleasant unsatisfied situation.
For example, people face a situation that they do not like their workplace. If
they want to improve their workplace, they have to write a document and submit it
to the company or government. Moreover, it takes long time for the request to be accepted and changed (이렇게 작성하면 불필요한 동어반복을 줄일 수 있죠.) company or government
to accept and change their request. Therefore, they just accept their bad situation.
On the other hand, other people there are those who say that it
is better to improve a bad situation. If people do not try to change and insist
their right, the world cannot become better. The world would not be advanced. For example, in certain countries, a woman who fulfills every
qualification of promotion cannot be promoted because of her gender in the certain
country. If she just (여기에 동사 하나가 들어가야겠죠.) her unfair situation, nothing changes. However, if she tries try
to change this unfair and bad situation by informing this situation to others
or telling it to the government, the firm might accept her request, and she can get a promotion. Other women in this country also can hope of promotion.
In conclusion, I believe that it is best to
try and improve a bad situation since humans have the has ability and right to improve
the bad situation. If people do not try to improve such situation, the world can
not be changed. |