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It is widely accepted that the proper age line of a second language education is a controversial subject. Some people claim that children will should start to learn an exotic language as soon as possible (여기에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.), while others deny these opinions. I will discuss several benefits on this essay in details. First of all, children should learn an exotic language as early as possible. In other words, children can absorb the language more easily than adults because their immature brain are more flexible to take new knowledge, movement and even bad habits. One of the best example is ‘mother language’ The only difference between mother language and second language is the time when the start point of learning begins. Literally we absorbed our own language from our parents since when we were kids. Thus our flexible brain just naturally accepted all kinds of language structures such as grammar and, vocabulary. Secondary learning Secondly, learning a totally different area makes children get more opportunities opportunity to take new things and become used to dealing with even strange tasks. For example, since after 2000, plenty of primary schools in Korea have made make diverse language exchange programs with their own sibling school. Although the programs are only for vacation because of children’s academic schedule, those programs regard as sensational education method since now days.
In conclusion, I definitely there are much more benefits to learn a foreign language since children were young because of the natural ability to absorb a language and the largest opportunity to understand the exotic world.
*라이팅 팁 적어주신거 읽어보고 장단점 둘다 쓰는대신 (outweigh 같은경우는 채점관마다 다르다고 하셨지만..!) 장점만 서술했는데 전개 방법 맞을까요?
둘 중 뭘 골라도 크게 상관은 없는데, 대신 단순히 장점 (혹은 단점) 자체만 넣는 게 아니라, 말 그대로 왜 한 쪽이 다른 쪽을 outweigh 하는지를 잘 보여주셔야해요~
*또 예시가 길게 작성됬네요 ㅠㅠ 내용자체가 좀 부실해보이기도 하구요 (특히 두번째 문단에서 그렇게 되었네요 시간맞추고 쓰다보니 정신없이 썼나봅니다 ㅠㅠ 다음부터는 시정하겠습니다~~!)
항상 감사합니다!
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