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Some people believe that enjoying their own job is more valuable than
job stability, however, others think that working as a permanent worker is more
important than job satisfaction (앞에서 언급된 경우이므로, 생략이 가능합니다. 더군다나 무당벌레님께서는 분량에 다소 민감하시므로 생략하는 게 더 좋겠고요.). Before deciding my decision (decide, decision 중 하나는 대체해주세요!), I need to
scrutinize both views.
There are those who assert that the most significant fact is that the (앞부분의 경우도 불필요한 수식입니다.) a permanent job is a fundamental source of abundant life for ordinary people. It
is true that all people need a certain amount of money regularly for their
daily living while saving for their unexpected future. Because of this, the
regular income that people receive every month or two weeks could be a way to
maintain their daily living. Moreover, with this guaranteed period to work
before retirement, the pubic could be responsible for their family members.
That is the reason why many students are eager to be hired in very stable
condition companies with/of a very stable condition as permanent employees.
However, others insist that there is nothing more important than personal
satisfaction in people’s lives. Alongside the development of society, there has
been the myriad of job positions, and more and more people tend to choose what
they really want to. In this situation, people would change their job position several
times or sustain their life just with temporary work. Furthermore, the public
would receive less stress in the working place, even they will endure some
severe situations to achieve more satisfaction that those who chose their work
considering only job stability would not never feel.
In conclusion, I think that job stability is required to keep maintaining
an affluent life, while job satisfaction is also significant to achieve
personal goals. Therefore, both of them should be compatible.
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