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The graph illustrates energy consumption by 6 types of fuel in USA from 1980 to 2030 by quadrillion units. (확정된 수치와, 예측치가 구분된다는 점을 표현해주셔야 합니다. 이는 이 문단에서만 그치지 않고, 이후에도 해당되는 사항이에요. 현재와 같이 모조리 과거로 묶어서 서술해서는 안 됩니다.)
To sum up, the state of petrol and oil is always highest, coal and natural gas are at middle state, and others are similarly low.
First of all, the consumption volume of petrol and oil is always top in all years recording from about 30 quadrillion units (다른데에도 다 넣어주시면 돼요.) to 47 quadrillion. The amount of consumed coal and natural gas was fluctuated from 1980 to 2015 at similar quantity, but after then, will show (이런 식으로 다른 곳에도 구분해주시면 됩니다. will 이 너무 많이 쓰이지 않도록 주의해주시고요~is expected to 등 여러 표현이 가능합니다.) different aspect that the consumption level of coal will grow up to about 30 quadrillion, and the level of natural gas will be steady at about 23 quadrillion.
The consumption amounts of other fuels were almost the same from 1980 to 1985. However, the consumption level of nuclear has risen up to about 6 quadrillion and is predicted to keep that state until 2030. The consumption levels of solar/wind and hydropower were fluctuated at the similar value from 1990 to 2005, but has changed, and solar/wind will gradually grow up to about 5 quadrillion in 2030, and the consumption of hydropower will steady at about 3 quadrillion.
이제 Task1도 해보려고 하는데... 생각보다 어렵군요 ㅜ.
원래 task 1은 누구에게나 어렵습니다ㅎㅎtask 2는 영어랑 글쓰기만 잘하면 돼서 10명의 수험생 중 1~2명은 잘 하지만, task 1은 영어+글쓰기에 표 분석 능력까지 가지고 있어야 하므로 보통 50명 중에 1명 정도만이 잘 합니다! 누구에게나 어려우니까 걱정하지 마세요~ |