Your Answer ▼ Undoubtedly, technology plays a significant role in society. Some people think that it has brought important benefits to our lives, while others do not. Both sides may have their own reasons to support their views. If I were asked to state my opinion, I would say that technology has a lot of advantages. The reasons are as follows. On the one hand, the opinion that technology has had a negative effect on our society is convincing. This is because it made a lot of pollutions on our earth. Thus, it affects to decrease people’s overall happiness. To be specific, the air pollution made people suffer from cancers. According to recent research conducted by the Seoul National University in 2019, the number of patients who suffer from respiratory symptoms is doubled from 94,000 in 2000 to 190000 in 2019. The main cause was air pollution, made by many plants producing machines. This study shows that how improving technology has a negative effect on the environment. On the other hand, it is evident that technology helps our work performance more effectively and accurately. The reason is that machines can process plenty of information easily. For example, my elder sister did poorly in her workplace, so she often felt depressed. However, after she mastered computer skills through a computer specialist program, she was able to finish her work more easily and quickly. As a result, she was able to enjoy her free time frequently. This case shows the improvement of technology gives populates time and freedom. All things considered, the benefits of technology far outweigh the shortages of technology for the reasons as I mentioned above. All in all, the importance of technology cannot be overestimated in our society.
6.5~7점을 원하고 있습니다. 설문조사를 사용하는 것에 대해 빈약하다는 조언을 주셔서 지양하려 했는데 사실 아이디어가 없어서 고민하다가 결국은 설문 조사를 사용하게 되는 일이 많습니다. ㅠㅠ 위의 경우도 많이 논리가 부족해 보이는지 의견 듣고 싶습니다. 늘 도움 주셔서 감사드립니다. |