Your Answer ▼ Sedack The images illustrate the map of Grange Park in 1920 and today with chages.
In genarally, almost everything in the park were changed today compared with the park in 1920. Overview 를 이렇게 쓰면 안 쓰는 것과 별반 차이가 없습니다. 여기에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드릴게요.)
First of all, the fountain was at the center of the park in 1920, but has been changed to a rose garden surrounded with four seats (이렇게 작성하면 '의자' 가 네 개라는 의미가 되어버리는데, 지도에 따르면 네 개인 것은 '의자들' 입니다. 즉, 몇 개의 의자들이 묶여있는 seat 들이 네 개가 있는 것이죠.). The glass house and seats at the southeastern corner of the garden were substituted by a water feature as well. The pnd for water plants also has been gone today, and , now, this area is developed to a children's play area. The left side of the garden was totally changed. The stage for musicians with four seats has been changed to a much bigger stage that is an amphitheatre for concerts with a number of seats. In adittion, three rose gardens were modified to one garden at the northwestern corner of the garden.
There is a new cafe at the left side of children's play area instead of the rose garden. Lastly, underground car park was maden, and the entrance is at the corner besides the water feature.
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