Your Answer ▼ Sedack In modern society, with numerous changes in jobs, a number of people want to be self-employed rather than hired at institutes. In this essay, the causes and disadvantages of this phenomenon will be discussed.
With the huge development of technologies, numerous kinds of works have been disappeared. Although some new jobs have arisen are arosen, these are too little to catch the problems of shortage of jobs, and people are suffering difficulties to get a job. However, some people have success in a new fields of job, and most of these people are a freelancer like Youtube YouTube streamer. Because these self-employed works are seen as much easier than company life, the public have a positive thought about being a freelancer and hope to be one themselves.
However, there could be several disadvantages of being self-employed. First of all, the volume of market of freelancing job is too small yet. In other words, the ways of being self-employed are too confined, thus the rate of competition is severe. The competitive job also arlso means the difficulties of earning money. In addition, there is no one who give a regular salary to freelancer. (프리랜서는 일정한 수입을 벌지 못한다~라고 적어주시면 돼요. 현재의 문장과는 약간의 의미 차이가 있습니다.) That is, self-employed workers could be in danger of an unstable income which can be linked to an unstable life. (unstable 둘 중 하나는 가급적이면 대체해주시는 게 좋습니다. 여건이 되는 선에서만요. 예를 들면, 지금과 같이 허겁지겁 40분에 맞추는 상황이면 이런 동의어 생각할 여유는 없겠죠.)
In conclusion, these days, many people prefer to be self-employed for the reasons of the changing tren in the a job market, and some successful freelancers. However, the fields of self-employing job are significantly competitive, and the income cannot be ensured.
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