Your Answer ▼ It is a common belief that getting a part-time job with attending school gives some learning to teens. However, there is a more persuasive opinion that it makes them so laborious both on studying and working. (참고로 지금의 서론은 암기한 티가 정말 팍팍 나기 때문에, 7점 이상에서는 웬만하면 권장드리지 않습니다. 현재의 논제처럼 이 구조가 적용이 안 되는 논제도 많고요. 그러므로 그냥 나만의 표현으로 써주시는 게 좋습니다. 만약에 나만의 표현으로 도저히 못 만들겠다면 어쩔 수 없지만요...)
On the one hand, part-time jobs teach students about the virtues required to succeed. Teenagers can learn how to keep discipline and are taught that they have to accomplish their duty. For example, my friend worked at a cafe and she could be taught the role which is allowed to her is such important when she lives in the communities, one day. (나중에 마지막 글에서 자세히 말씀드리겠지만, 이 예시를 보충하는 방법으로는, 실제 저 role 들이 무엇이 있는지를 제시하는 것이 있습니다. 그렇지 않고 지금처럼만 적으면 그저 앞의 말에 대한 반복에 지나지 않고요.) Also, she could learn the importance of responsibility to doing her own task after then.
Nevertheless, working part-time and studying at the same time distracts students and makes them weary. When they have to deal with both things, it can be pretty stressful. In addition, their leisure time will be reduced and every urgent schedule would make makes them pressured. In fact, there are some students who have part-time jobs after schools in college get lower scores compared to others who do not have jobs. This is because they feel bot easy to live (not 인가요?) and not comfortable to focus on studying.
To sum up, there is an advantage to learn how to succeed by doing properly but it is apparent that there are disadvantages of no free time to take a break and to study. |