Your Answer ▼A common phenomenon seen in modern society is the way of storing knowledge (지식을 저장하는 '방법' 자체는 phenomenon, 즉 현상이라고 볼 수 없습니다. 인터넷에 지식을 저장하는 것 등으로 구체화하면 몰라도요. 이런 문제가 생기면 채점관은 문장을 암기했다고 간주하므로 주의해주세요~). People can achieve intelligent development by saving knowledge from the internet (인터넷은 고유명사이므로 대문자로 시작해주시면 됩니다. 다른에데도 다 수정해주세요!) rather than from books. I believe that this has more potential benefits than drawbacks.
On the one hand, it can be argued that storing knowledge on the internet has an detrimental effect on people’s everyday life. Spending longer hours by searching for information on the computer or cellphone can be bring health problems such as getting low eye sight or chronic back pain. More importantly, individuals can be addicted to using the internet whenever they need to know something even if they can find it easily from other means. When people cannot use the internet and have to deal with their problems, they might feel devastated and depressed since they have excessively relied excessively rely on using the internet.
On the other hand, this development has also had positive consequences. As a result of increased achieving knowledge on the internet, many students and workers have completed their task effectively and productively. They could save the time to study compared to the past because they are able to access the information they want at anytime. In addition, once the knowledge they received on the internet, it could be permanently saved on the internet without any concerns of space or damage. That is the reason why many companies and organizations try to save their important contents on the internet to protect it from by other invasions.
In conclusion, although saving knowledge on the internet have disadvantages for some individuals because of health concerns and addition, an increase in the increased the way of storing knowledge on the internet has truly led positive effects on society as it brought productivity and protection. Therefore, the positive effects outweigh the disadvantages.
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