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The idea of which subject students should study
in university has always been a subject of debate. Some people argue that students better study useful subjects which can help in their future while others feel
that students must be able to can learn about whatever they want in university. Although arguments
on both sides are worth exploring, I think that students (students 의 경우 상황에 따라 이런저런 동의어, 그리고 대명사 사용이 가능하므로, 너무 많이 쓰여서 글을 지루하게 만들지 않도록 해주세요~) better learn many things
what they want in undergraduate school.
On the one hand, those who believe students should only be allowed to study valuable subjects in school have valid reasons. To be
specific, nowadays there are more opportunities of jobs in science and
technology fields rather than other fields such as management or accounting (아예 운동, 미술 등으로 바꿔서 대비를 확 시키는 게 좋습니다.). Moreover,
these kinds of jobs have better salary and vision of future career for the long
term. To illustrates, my older brother, working as technology engineer, has always been satisfied
with his job because he can be more professional in that field and there have various
things available to learn for him to be far knowledgeable. Consequently, with these
reasons, some people push undergraduates (여기의 동의어 사용은 좋았습니다.) to study only helpful subjects as they
want students to be a successful person in the future.
On the other hand, there are those who feel
students should learn whatever they want. It is commonly observed that,
students may try to experience many kinds of subjects and then they will able
to decide what they would like to be after their graduation. This is because,
not enough time was given to them to learn various things outside except just
studying at school when they were high school students. This clearly shows that
students can be filled with full of experiences, by studying whatever they like, and it can help
them to easily choose a major subject related to what they want to be.
In conclusion, both types of what subject students
should study in university offer a variety to students. Given this situation, I
firmly believe that learning whatever they like will be helpful for students to
decide their future jobs, since it helps provide experience to a wide variety of things (앞에 both types subjects 라고 해주셨는데, 현재 대비가 되는 사항인 원하는 과목 vs 미래에 도움되는 과목은 both types of subejcts 로 묶을 수 없습니다. 차라리 both opinions 등으로 적으면 모를까요.). |