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These days many people has have been living in a country that they have to speak with a foreign language for various reasons. It is commmonly (파란 단어는 철자, 혹은 기타 오타가 있는 표현이므로 꼭 정확한 철자를 사전에서 찾아보세요!) said that this situation can cause serious social problems and practical problems. I agree with this idea because people who living in a foreign country can receive a disadvantages and discriminations.
First of all, from a practical perspective, foreign people can receive a disadvantages from various contract processes such as a housing contract and labour contract. For example, in South Korea, housing contract is quite complicated. Of course there are several agencies agency for a foreigner, but the cost is expensive so most of foreigners doing this themselves. But (문장을 and but so 로 시작하는 것은 지양해주세요~) if the foreigner who have has a lack of language skill trying to make a contract themselves, there may be misunderstandings in the communication between a foreigner and a house owner. This situation could lead to legal problems which can effect a the visa Visa of foreigners.
Secondly, from a social perspective, living in foreign country can lead to discriminations. This is because when a local person who was born and raised in this country and foreigners who are not familiar whith that language talk together, the local person may feel annoyed and tend to look down on them. In South Korea, there are a large number of foreign workers who came from East Asia (동남아시아로 적는 게 더 정확하긴 한데, 사실 뭐 크게 중요한 사항은 아닙니다.). They have got a row deal by their boss, just because they are inarticulate in their speech. This problem occurs not only at workplace but also at restaurants and other facilities.
In conclusion, I agree whith this idea that living in a country where they have to speak foreign language can cause social and practical problems. Because people who living in foreign country can be discriminated and disadvantaged beacase (여기는 철자를 떠나서 앞의 because 와의 반복을 피하기 위해 due to 등으로 바꿔주시는 게 좋습니다.) of their language problems.
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