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The bar graphs compare the number of what graduate and postgraduate students what they did after leaving university in
2008. (풀타임 직업 제외라는 아주 중요한 전제조건이 하나 빠져있습니다.)
Overall, it is apparent that the number of
students who did further study was the most chosen as most destinations while working voluntary
was less chosen from them in both graduates and postgraduates in 2008.
In the first graph, the most notable feature
is that almost thirty thousand of students were decided to study more, it which is nearly
doubled than the figure of working part-time and being unemployment. The number of students who
chose to do part-time work and be unemployment showed similar trends, with
17,735 and 16,235 numbers of graduate students, respectively.
In the second graph, this illustrates almost
same pattern with the first graph. Students who chose to exercise more in their
study was higher than following option which is working part-time job, the gap
between to was only 190 numbers of students. (바로 이 부분 때문에 same pattern 으로 보기 어렵습니다. 학사과정에서는 1,2위 간 차이가 꽤 많이 나는 편이지만, 대학원생들의 경우 차이가 거의 없기 때문에, 둘은 이 면에서는 전혀 다른 패턴을 보인다고 분석해주셔야 해요.) After them, the amount of deciding
to be unemployment (상식적으로 봤을 때, 실업을 스스로 정하지는 않습니다. 그러므로 decide 라고 적기는 어렵고, 그냥 the number of postgraduates who were unemployed ~등으로 적어주시면 돼요. 이는 윗 문단에도 마찬가지입니다.) reached 1,625 students in the same period. |