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People now have the
freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of
communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the
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It is clearly to say that, thanks to the notable
development in transportation and technologies, people do not have to wait letters
or new information for a long time. However, some people say that it makes us easily exhausted
By remarkable growth of the air transportation
system, companies are able to recruit On the other hand, some people complain that the
human rights have been abused by the developed technologies and transportation.
One reason is that work-rest period has been shrunk after work since people can
work anytime and anywhere, for example, we can frequently the people who work
in the airplane by using their laptop and smartphone, apart from sleeping and
eating as airline industry newly introduced aircraft wi-fi. (여기의 경우 새로운 문장으로 끊어가는 게 낫습니다.) What is more, as
the electronic devices are normally expensive, it became a new target of burglars. Thus, tourists In conclusion, although there are some negative
aspects on the smart technologies and transportation, I firmly believe that the
positive effects |
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