삼십분정도 걸려 처음으로 제힘으로 써본 task1 이에요 ㅠㅠ 아 너무 어렵네요 아는 단어도 없어서 쥐어짜고 글자 채우기 급급. 급한 마음에 시험 잡아둔 거 환불도 안되서 공부 많이 해서 다음에 보아야 겠어요 부족하지만 첨삭해주시면 감사하겠습니다. 모두 화이팅 :D
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The graph describes the proportion of the population aged 65 and over. It shows the changes of population from 1940 to 2040. Increasing of population aged people is almost same, but it is quiet different between Sweden, USA and Japan.
From 1940 to 1960, the lines of two countries (Sweden, USA) are rising. But the line of Japan is falling. Furthermorem at the 2030, proportion of population which is elder people of Japan increase noticeable while others going to top similarly. And then the number of Japan becomes higher than Sweden and USA. Also, it records to highest point of the graph.
On the other hands, Sweden and USA draw likely each other. However, between 1980 and 2020, the proportion of population aged 65 and over is slightly decreasing during the thoes percentages of Sweden is enlarging (5%).
In conclusion, simply all the lines of graph are rising for 100 years, The elder people's proportion has changed from 7% to 25% generally. It will be causes of many changes : industry for aged people, the fee to care thoes people, and the length of life in average which we know. |
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