▶ Your Answer : Nowadays, the most companies and enterprises are using the advertisement in general. There are many sorts of advertisements. People who contact with the advertisement think to buy goods that are firmly not needs to them. This topic is a controversial one. Sometimes, I am tempted from the advertisements as well. In this essay I >> I는 대문자입니다 항상 will insist agreement argue about the given question.
The buying is up to buyers,>> 콤마 빼주세요 and it is not wrong to buy goods through advertisements on the television or the Internet. However, there are a number of people who buy goods suddenly impulsively. In addition, some goods are unusable to the purchaser after impulse buying. Especially, fans of a star who shoots advertisements usually buy goods even if it is unnecessary. Though the purchasing is up to an individual, many people are affected from the advertisements.
Besides, I think that people may have obsession about closing >> ??. As I heard about closing on home shopping, I feel kind of anxiety about that goods are sold out >> ??. In my experience, I have bought a shaver from implication of impending closing then i obviously do not need it >> ??, so I gave it as a gift to my father. Moreover, especially, home shopping always emphasizes on remaining only few merchandises then people like such as가 더 좋습니다 me generally waver. Therefore, a number of people are dazzled from closing, there is another impulse purchasing from temptation in that order.
In summary, it is people's choice to make a decision to buy goods. However, there are many people who purchase impulsively from advertisements and urgent closing. Sometimes, an advertising agency needs to adjust being not excessive for people who cannot control their volition.
작문에서 이해가 안되는 부분들이 많았습니다 두번째 본문에서 closing이라고만 떡하니 써 놓으시면 과연 어떻게 주장을 보고 무슨 말을 할 줄 알까요? 글에는 마땅한 흐름이나 연계가 필요합니다 작문을 더 연습해보시길 바랍니다
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