▶ Your Answer :
The bar graph provides information on the proportion in the five different levels of post-school qualifications according to gender in Austrailia in 1999.
As seen from the chart, the percentage of male students was higher in post-graduate diploma and master's degree than that of female students. Over 60% of these qualifications were received by given to men while under 40% of them were by to women. In addition, it is interesting to note that male students took up over 90% in vocational diploma. Only 10% of this diploma . Meanwhile, the rest of the percentage was taken by women.
However, in the case of undergraduate diploma, the proportion of female students was greater than that of male students. Women who obtained undergraduate diploma were over double as much as of men who received this diploma did.(70%) It is also apparent that female students obtained bachelor's degree slightly more than male students during surveyed period. Women with bachelor's degree accounted for 55%, whereas men took up 45%.
Overall, men were more likely to obtain higher level of degrees than women.
비교로 문장을 작성해나가서 좋았습니다
다만 표현하는 방법이 너무 한정적인 듯 싶습니다
단어라던가 문장구조라던가 더욱 넓혀주시면 좋겠습니다
문단 시작은 들여쓰기입니다 문법의 일종입니다
Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 6
6.0 예상합니다 |