▶ Your Answer :
I am writing this letter to let you know that able to start with my career at your company .
My name is John and I am so glad that joining your company from next week.
Dear. international company
Hello, I am writing this letter to inform my decision on your proposal. Finally, I am willing to agree to your offer and I am so glad to join your company in next week. As people may know, your company is one of the huge industries has a huge effect on the world and it makes me so proud of myself.
I have graduated from Holmesglen TAFE a month ago, so I am an apprenticeship of a welder. I have been working for 6 months as a welder in an engineering company.
If your company give me an opportunity to choose a department, I would choose perform in maintenance department. The reason why I choose it is that it is also related to my former experience and I strongly believe that it will helps me such as interpret drawings and the way of repairing machines >> interpret 은 동사 the way of~ 는 명사입니다 두 구조를 맞춰주시구요 콤마가 아닌 and로 연결해주세요. Even if I am being hired volunteer work the work is unpaid, I would not mind at all but appreciate it. Please let me know anything that I have to do with regard to your company’s rule.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Regards.
John.
문단을 너무 나눠버리면 글이 지저분해 보이니 적절히 세 개로 전체를 구성해주시구요 위에 지적해드린 부분들 봐주세요 편지 형식은 써보지 않고 학교에서 잠깐 배웠던 내용을 바탕으로 말씀드려서 부족한 부분 이해 부탁드립니다 ..
Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5
6.0 예상합니다 |