■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become positive development?
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▶ Your Answer :
These days, most of us have smart phones and use it every minute. People do not contact each other by calling only, but they use various technologies like MMS, e-mail and SNS(social network service). The development of technology has greatly affected the ways people interact with each other. In this short essay, I want to discuss how the development of technology has affected human relationships in modern world and how the technology worked out positively.
The development of modern technology has enabled us widen our circles. We don't have much difficulty understanding other cultures around the globe because using technology, we can meet a lot of different people of diverse backgrounds if we want. In my case, I have a wonderful friend in China, whom I met through an internet community. She and I have been contacting on line and teaching each other languages of our home countries.
Technology makes people to contact more often and lower the barriers among cultures. This is because nowadays, thanks to technology, interactions between people are getting faster, cheaper and more convenient.
In short, modern day technology has contributed to our lives by widening human circles and making it easier to contact with each other. Therefore, we should appreciate the development of modern day technology and use it wisely.
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