Nowadays, children’s education has been concerned as a major concern of by many parents. It is often a controversial issue that whether the children should take excessive free time or it is much better to do their assignment during that time. Personally, I think that, concentrating on their schoolwork on that time will give huge impacts on their future success and living desirable life.
Fist of all, forcing the children to study in their leisure time can prevent from being a troublemaker. This is because, during the study time, they can concentrate only one task without any detrimental thoughts, such as playing games or watching adults video (콩글리쉬 입니다 pornography), which can be harmful to the youngster since they it is still hard for them to control themselves. For example, most children are in favor of playing games which are technically advanced and for them it is hard to manage the adequate time and eventually they are addicted to with it. However, if the children do their mandatory work (의무적인 일? 주제와 상관없는 단어 선택입니다) at that time, they can escape from the negative thoughts and enhance their academic ability.
In addition, by focusing on the school assignment, naturally they children (문단 바뀌면서는 첫문장부터 대명사 사용x, 다시 언급해주세요) can improve their exam score which will be help them gain a competitive edge in their collage admission. In general, it is certain that prominent universities seek the applicants who have a higher score than others, and entering these collaeges offering various opportunities help them to plan successful life. Therefore, to earn these chances, immersing on the academic study is inevitable. To be more specific, even on their free time they should do their assignment to get a high score as there are many competitors. Therefore, as time goes by, their endeavor will shed light on the conspicuous results which not only entering renowned universities but also strengthening self satisfaction. As a result, the young students take it for grand (정황상 매우 어색한 표현 선택) to study on their leisure time for the future.
To sum up, these days, it is booming about how could parents rear their children as the best way.? Therefore, I believe that inducing the young children to do schoolwork even on their free time will bring a beneficial effect in their future life whereas excessive time to play will be detrimental for them.
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