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The line graph sheds light on shows how many people visited in London museums in London which are categorized with three; the British, Science and National History from June to September in 2013.
The most notable feature is that the largest number of people was taken by the British museum, which was reached at about 750 thousand in July and there was a sudden decline until August from 750 to under 500 and a dramatic increase until September with 650.
When it comes to Science and National History museums, there were similar trends, which were upward and downward; National History museum showed a decrease in the number of visitors from June to July and stabilization until August. Similarly, Science museum showed a subtle drop until August and after that, they (대명사 사용 주의, they는 누구?) climbed at about 450. In addition, there was no alteration in ranking; Science museum took the least number during the whole period.
Overall, despite dramatic fluctuations of visitor’s number, the British museum attracted the most majority of people and the rest showed a similar result at the end of period.
SCORE: 5.5
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