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According to the process of urbanisation, many cities become more overcrowded thant ever before. For this reason, some people are concerned that it might threaten 무엇을? 목적어? from social and physical crisis. So, in my opinion, developing the city (토픽은 도시 밀집도 증가입니다, 시티의 발전이 아니라, 조금 더 명확하게 표시하는 것이 좋겠습니다.) are not acceptable phenomenon for several reasons.
First of all, increasing the density of city causes the physical problems of people who are living in area because of the environmental influences. Especially, air pollution is one of the most serious problems in city, and it also comes from the fossil fuels that from using an air conditioner and carbon dioxide emitted from the vehicles, such as a car. Becuase these substanses attribute the air pollution, as a result, this effects natually affect flow into the people, and it let them to causes the diseases. In this regard, development of a city is should not be permitted especially within the limited area.
On top of that, the city that composed of small living low density areas are is generally expensive to purchase in theri real estates. For example, Hong Kong has a the most narrow living areas because around them are mountains. So, their real estate buildings are very expensive to buy compared with other city in the world. Therefore, residents in Hong Kong are rent the house because they are not dare cannot afford with buying a house. As a result, it could be a one of the social problems. It is evident that the high density of city has a high privce of ?houses? real estate.
In conclusion, overcrowded city is not beneficial for people because there are some problems, such as air pollution, and expensive real estate. Therefore, I object to the congestion of city.
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