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People have different views about future planning.
Some people tend to concentrate on the present rather than the future. While
this view is right, I believe that our energy should be on planning for the future
goal.
The
first reason why people need to design their goal is that a future plan gives them (people 과 호응시켜야 합니다.) the us
right direction for our their lives and it enables them us to manage the time efficiently.
People who did not set the goal might easily lose the way to go be easily lost way to go. For example,
children who want to be a doctor will spend more time to study than students who
do not have a certain goal. In other words, planning for the future encourages them to achieve that particular goal us to
achieve it. By following what they established before, they would not need to waste time given in their lives we established before, we do not waste time given
in our lives.
Moreover,
making a plan for the future is a good opportunity to change the present. Some
people might be felt feel dissatisfaction about their current situations. However, the The use of
planning will promote the quality of life as they dreamed. For instance, a person
who struggles with poverty can be the rich later as he sets a goal to raise
salary or get a better job opportunity. We can easily find this case through media
or books. Research about successful man (여기는 man, 즉 한 명) revealed that people (여기는 사람들, 즉 여러 명으로 서술되어있기 때문에 통일이 안 되어있죠. 위의 인칭 통일과 비슷한 맥락에서 CC/GRA 에 동시에 영향을 주는 사항이므로 반드시 잡아주셔야 합니다. 전자를 men 으로 바꾸든지 해서 통일을 시켜주셔야 하고, 추가적으로 특별한 이유 없이 특정 성별로 한정짓는 것은 좋지 못합니다.) who had a plan for
future are achieve better position in the company compared to people who did
not have it and that is why successful man like CEO addresses about the
importance of planning for future.
In conclusion, if our current lives are not satisfactory, it is true
that we need to think considerably about our future and make a goal to change
it.
목표점수는 6.5입니다. 많은 지도 부탁드립니다.
네 dgns님 정보 감사합니다! 추가적으로 그 점수를 언제까지 받으셔야 하는지, 그리고 무조건 6.5를 받아야 하는지 아니면 6.0도 괜찮은지 같이 알려주시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다~그리고 6.5 이상부터는 문법/어휘가 매우 중요하기 때문에, 여기서 제가 내용은 잡아드릴 수 있지만, 결국 dgns님께서 스스로 얼마나 문법을 잡을 수 있는지가 관건이 될 겁니다. 고로 문법/어휘 공부를 매일매일 꾸준히 하는 것이 가장 중요합니다 :)
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