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Diagnostic test test 1
The trend of using transportaion in US is changed in 2010 compared to trend of 1970.
In 2010, the proportions of truck is the highest. And the next is taxi. The share of bus is the lowest.
Truck was the most popular transportation in 1970. At that time, the proportions of the truck was shy of 50%. But it decreased to the low of 30 percentage in 1980. After the lowest usage, the share of truck has been increasing until 2010. The proportion in 2010 is similar to that of 1970.
The second type of commercial vehicles is Taxi in 2010. Taxi is in the second position during the period except 1980. In 1980, Taxi was the most popular vehicle, the proportion was around 35% which was 5% bigger than Truck. After the peak in 1980, the share of taxi had been decreased gradually until 2000 which was the lowest point. After 2000, the rate of taxi registeration increased rapidly up to 35%. The percentage of 2010 is as same as that of 1980 which was the peak.
On the other hand, the proportion of bus has been the last position from 1970 to 2010. As the taxi registration increased between 1970 and 1980, the bus registration increase too. But the rate of bus has been shrunken steadily until 2010. The share of bus in 2010 is only about 5%. That is about one of ninth of the bus.
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