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The news media has its growing influence on people’s everyday life. Some people think that it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are some people who think that news media enormously impacts on people’s lives unfavorably. However, in my opinion, this is the obvious fact that the news media has paid dividends by letting people approach information in ease by and large. This is because, in a fast-paced society, the mass media not only makes all processes a breeze to access but also help to distinguish high qualities of data from the others.
To begin with, calling for information society, the trend in the whole world is being a live with a variety of information. It means that people no longer are no longer able to live behind of the information for a life and, furthermore, a work or a study. From my personal experience, one of my friends who works for a stock company, checking every single stock which he handles via mobile phone in a subway in the morning on the way to go to work. The reason why is that the new data comes up in the morning so that he has to build up every datum to prepare to carry on when he get gains at work immediately. If there were not a choice to get acquire information via his phone directly by touching its screen easily, it would be harder to correct data in a short time - 가운데 - 빼주세요. It has shown that the mass media provides convenient lives by surrounding people to access a tendency easily.
On top of that, the mass media gives rise to a chance to differentiate right or correct information from a massive data. People easily approach to various data from different sources and furthermore, diverse thought about the same topic at a first glance. According to the research by CNN, as the number of users who are a member of social network such as twitter has increased, it often has happened that people chase the truth and find out a clue among the hot topics. The research has shown that this trend not only acquires an ability themselves to get have a cream of crop >> 아카데믹한게 아닙니다 from ample data but also inspires people to belong to mass media as a member of society by oneself.
To sum up, the new media is growing up and is being around people with a great deal of benefits, moving with the time of informational society. In this regard, I do firmly believe that the mass media brings numerous advantages, making people convenient catching up within contemporary society.
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